(As you can probably tell I absolutely love call of duty). SOPHIES BEDROOM I look up at the ceiling and see a spider in the corner. There are photos of my family and a painting that I did myself. I like the incredible detail you've put into this text. Also my carpet is brown. William I liked your descriptive words and the structure of your paragraphs. The tv, my tv is a black 32 inch philips tv which is about 9 years old but It's still works good. On my blue wall there is a white butterfly that sits on a hook. It is the largest bedroom in the house it is rectangular and has a built in wardrobe. My room doesnt smell that good. Sometimes I play music from my bluetooth speaker and my brother comes in and screams and dances along to the music. I think my bedroom is amazing but still has a bit of work to be done on it for it to be a masterpiece! Very descriptive and easy to imagine your bedroom and feel how special it is to you. I mostly use this as a storage place but I also like to sometimes use it for doing my homework on, reading or other things like that. I have a table in my room strewn with fly tying equipment and materials, it shows that I like fishing. I agree that it needs to be cleaner! Yes it definately is the best bedroom in the house and yes we are all jealous!!!! It has gym equipment, sports bags, a comfy queen sized bed and many more. The sun shines in my room which makes my room warm up. Brooke, I like the way you used your vocabulary skills. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. A nice piece of writing William. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. Maybe next time try to write more in some paragraphs, and tell us about more things. Jakes Bedroom People who work from home might have a big computer setup with large monitors, webcams, and microphones. I slowly put my hand on the door handle and opened it, the sun instantly warmed me up, the colours stood out, the bed looked very cosy and the wall decoration looked very creative and bright. My miniature dog and cow sculptures sitting on my desk beginning to gather dust. If you walk into my room your senses would explode because of the smell, sight, sound, touch. I walk into my bedroom, a jungle room full of worn clothes, toys and balls. Annies Bedroom I have always enjoyed my bedroom as describes the character of me, as it being a part of my life, it describes the aspects of what I like such as colours, patterns, decoration and the bedroom layout. This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. I work my way through the chaos and reach my bed. The walls of my room are not too interesting at the moment, as they are covered in a bright white wall paper sealer ready for my new paint colours of white and teal blue. Also two comfy blue headphones and it's sound is great as well I have had this for a few months now. This is the exact opposite of the earlier metaphor saying that your home is a workplace. The paddock sometimes has sheep in it. The colours in my room are bright with my duvet which is mixed with bright light colour then there is my light blue curtains hanging by a Dark aqua chair. He is a pig. What is the rising action of faith love and dr lazaro? A metaphor for home explains your feelings about your home by using figurative language. Well done. The furniture in my room fits nicely with my double bed in the corner by my door, my bedside table beside that, my desk in the corner beside the windows and my chair beside my wardrobe. I'll describe my bedroom with my coziest of my bedroom, colors of my bedroom my bed and the state bedroom. as your beautiful grey carpet is covered with clothes sometimes! Next to my desk is a black and white Beanbag chair where I sit when Im either reading or watching Netflix. The layout of the room has a facing direction pointing at the north east with side on single beds one near the huge closets and one across near the sliding windows for the sun to enter. My bed is really soft and comfy, just the way I like it. In my room there are lots of things to use like bop it and stuff like that. But Im lucky enough to have an en suite attached to my room! George Wareing 8WH. Then theres my laundry basket that is white with lots of clothes in it. But love your work. I liked the way you captured the masculine feel of the bedroom. Wow Megan that was amazing I really liked that one. It has a dark deep blue background with the flowers painted in a yellow so light it is almost white, the brush strokes carefully placed to show the wind gently blowing the flowers. Around the corner from my desk there is a window bay couch that is navy blue, across from the couch there is my Aqua chair covered in rugs and pillows. I wandered towards my bedroom put my hand on the chilled silver handle. I like her use of descriptive words and the slight humour. Down one side of it there are five drawers also filled with special items and on the bottom there is another drawer which is filled with gemstones. My bed is a king slat bed with black duvet sheets and black pillow cases (would like some new ones). Before long, the divide between work and home is blurred, and you can even metaphorically call your home a workplace because they appear so similar. I like my room because it's got enough space for all my stuff like my table for doing homework and my spare bed for if I have any friends come over. My room is a pigsty it has clothes all over the floor, shoes all over the floor and of course food plates that my dog has cleaned up. Another is made by myself, I got to design and paint it however I liked. I have the white bedside table right next to my bed because well i need something to put my drink on, and I think that's the same for my sister. I have recently changed around my room. We dont need all these lights on!. I think that the things in my room represent me and my interests. good work. you have used lots of good descriptive word and you spelling is good as well. Until you see that my little carpet paradise is surrounded by pile of mess. Nishmat Kol Chai In Russian, cock is life. If you open the window the fresh air wafts in. They are also a good way to annoy everyone in the house and wake them up when I want to. I think that my room is pretty cool because I have it all to myself and I have a lot of stuff in it, the carpet is pretty cool aswell. Quite a few good words but a lot of bland words in your writing making it a bit boring. My wardrobe is unbelievably messy because theres so much stuff I have to fit in it, because my room is small compared to all the other rooms. Descriptive writing is one of the essential skills that children will learn in school and progress into life. We usually waste power by turning on the lights just so we can see properly. The polaroid camera doesn't have anywhere else to go so it just sits on my desk. He is a untidy Australian Barraband and he is loud with a weird sense of humor some how. Room Metaphors and Similes. By my bed there is a book shelf on top it has a lamp and inside it has a variety of books, by the corner there is another book shelf and it has a green lava lamp on top and more books below. If you want to read a book from my bookshelf you can, but most of the good ones probably would've slipped down behind it,along with anything you sit on top of my bookshelf. Also there is a lot of sporting equipment scattered around the room. I have a blue stegosaurus lampshade, a monitor and PS4, a TV and even a bulletin board. Create your own unique website with customizable templates. The cleanliness of my bedroom is pretty good, but sometimes my football gear is left outside my wardrobe on the floor. So let's explore the den people called my room. Ano ang mga kasabihan sa sa aking kababata? It fits my school clothes, jerseys and other stuff. I also have a variety of colourful possessions around the room. I enjoy spending my own time just lying on my bed listening to music. James, I liked the way you structured your paragraphs and the whole description came together. The smell isn't actually to bad because I can open some huge, one meter high windows and blow out the stinky odours. Lastly, my favorite item in my room would be my lovely old fashioned jewelry box. your bedroom is like the inside of your head (simile). Most of the times it has clothes that cover the floor. Ano ang Imahinasyong guhit na naghahati sa daigdig sa magkaibang araw? Outside if you are lucky you can hear the birds chirping because my mum throws bread outside for the them to eat in the winter months. But I like it because I can change the room around to the way I like it. The background color of my wall is light sea blue. You described your bedroom well. I like the feel, the carpet, my bed and the size of it. When you walk into my room youll see my bed in the far right corner. The place I can get away from my sister and other hassles, a place where I have some good things, my bedroom. you could add more expression in your writing next time. The creamy brown carpet is pleasant. Awards are the next important thing that has to be hung up to admire the things I have done. In the left corner when you walk in is a stack of books, a few being written in swedish. Don't forget punctuation. Next your eyes will settle upon my short and skinny box shelf that is as black as the night with draws both as blue as the sea and as green as the algae the resides in it. I like how I am able to visualize your bedroom. My room is basically covered in sports equipment. I have a built in wardrobe that has shelves in it where I can store my belongings. I don't like the layout because my bed is on the other side of the room. To your left is a white table for doing homework on. My room is the smallest in the house but I love my room just the way it is. Again, were applying the feelings of being at home (relaxation and comfort) to some other situation and achieving this by making a comparative metaphor. I also love my reading area and the way that my half of the of my bedroom gets most of the sun. 4+, Oh my goodness Jake! In my room I also have a painting the my Aunty drew for me, It is a huge field of wheat with huts in them but no people from what you can see. The style of my bedroom is a wooden, boys and football styled room. Lots of descriptive words and nouns and adjectives make for interesting writing and make it really easy to read. But one thing that does make it dirty is my bird Percy, he leaves his seeds all over the floor and makes it the messiest. No matter what the season, my bed covers always match my room and it's theme. My rooms walls are two different colours. My curtains are also blue. Under the small window is my bed and to the left of the bed is my small bedside table with my grey shaded lamp on top. On the other side of the room is my chair with my blanket that fades from blue to white. My blinds are a creamy, white colour that go all the way to the floor. Bent u genteresseerd neem gerust contact met ons op. Nicely described George, your room is currently a blank canvas so you can do a lot with it. Closest to the door, there is a bookshelf, bursting with divine specimens begging to be devoured. Overall I am hoping my parents will be convinced that my room needs a change like some new sheets on my bed, some colour on the wall and to get rid of that useless desk. I move things around to make it look tidy. Overall I love my room. My turquoise blanket has a delicate touch, so fluffy you want to take it everywhere. I have a window that covers the whole wall so you can see outside. At first, I thought you were describing the ocean! I deposit myself there to snuggle up with a book, stroke my darling cat or simply sit on my bed, daydreaming, soaking up the sacred silence. Big books and small books. On one side is a white metal pole and on the other is a white wooden slab to keep the desk up and stable. Good work a nice peace of writing. My colors, I like the choice of colors that are in my bedroom. I think your writing has really improved this year. Brown that stands out because of the shine. 1. I have a foam pillow, so my head just sinks in. Then you see the messiness, then you see carpet in my bedroom with its light creamy colour which subtly catches your eye. well done kaden it does sound like your room. You would see all my clothes on my floor if you walked up stairs and all the undies on the floor could date back a month. I noticed that one word keep coming up wrong, it was colour. My room could be a bit neater though! What is the time signature of the song Atin Cu Pung Singsing? I do everything in my room, im pretty much always in there. You could have added some more descriptive words in there. My king single is the comfiest thing I have experienced with the reasonably old springy mattress that's kind of like a sink hole when you lie in it. Remember to carefully proof-read and edit your work. The theme of my bedroom is simply my favourite things. There are multi-coloured paper butterflies scattered all over the pale purple walls, swarming in corners and perching on the edges of family photographs. please help! The blankets on my bed are very colourful there is a bright red, white and grey striped blanket, a soft pink one and a plain white one. You described your room well George. there is a tree outside my bedroom window. On the left hand side under the window, with its red quilt and white duvet is the biggest piece of furniture in my room. My desk is a white desk and is placed against the back of the room to give a feeling that the colors are spaced out. All you can see is the drive way and trees. The cloths on the large draws with the big mirror really need to be tidied up and put away properly then there is the pile of bags that have my ski gear and cricket bag the big bags could deffently be tidyed up and put in the garag. The reader doesn't know what you mean, but overall its very good. Next to my bed is a brown wooden three drawer bedside cabinet which has edges that have been chewed on by dogs. I am sure that I will add tons more in the future. It was a great story. I think you edited the grammar well with making it make sense but there were a few spelling mistakes and no capitals for I Right in front of you as you walk in is my blue patterned desk with my small, white basketball hoop hanging above. My room has a fresh air smell and, in the morning you can hear the birds chirping outside, if you were to walk into my room it would be clean and tidy just the way I like it. The Five Imdb Parents Guide, The Ideas are relevant but I would like to see more elaborated Ideas in the text. My clothes they are placed in piles beside the wall because my dad has not got any draws for the room. My room also has a bit of a natural vibe as there are a far few plants around room. We have a small sister that isnt allowed in but she comes in anyway. The carpet is a soft grey colour with a squishy texture. State of my Bedroom.The state of my bedroom is well atrocious there's a mountain there and a another one over there. On my right hand side wall as you walk in there are my bright football posters, my flag poster and my Crusaders flag. In the corner an old dark glory box to go with the old wooden jewelry box upon the set of draws. I have a modern wooden desk for school work. Beneath the mountain is a variety of my calves running in the evening sun. There is a queen single bed covered in a white duvet and patterned blanket in the centre. Now my bedroom has amazing accessories such as the the useful charger plug built into the wall! Behind the door is a yellow, green and red stacker box with Jacksons toys in it. A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna since the air conditioner broke." Under my bed I throw just about everything down there like sport gear and clothes I can't be bothered putting away. Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly. You have described your room well and I can paint a picture. Another metaphor that could be used is, " so I was a bit confused. Now I will tell you about the sight, first I will tell you about the pictures and posters, on top of my duchess there is a is a drawing about what the future would look like, I drew in year 5 my mum thought it was a nice drawing so she framed it. Having the perfect bedroom isnt that hard as long as you make it yours. It smells like fresh vanilla because of the bowl of dried petals and shells that have been smothered with air freshener. I think you need to work on use of commas and apostrophes, some of them are not needed. My bed is very comfortable, fluffy and soft. They are very basic paragraphs but with good description in them. My bedroom supplies a marvellous view. But i have to admit I have a wonderful cleaner to clean my room but the way I left it was the day before the cleaner comes round. I like the part when you recognise that your room needs cleaning and organise your things to feel much comfortable but most of all you are comfortable in your room. Apart from blue the other colour that makes a common appearance is white as my walls, bedside table and shelves are white washed. The spelling was very good I struggled to find any mistakes. There is normally a lot of clothes spewing out of the the draws and onto the floor, it sortof looks like a waterfall if you are really imagine it, I find it frustrating when my Mum cleans it up because it is just going to get messy again. But overall my bedroom is to me one of the best bedrooms in the house. Once you eyes have shifted again you will see my big, pure white chest of draws in the right hand corner of the room pressed firmly against both the right hand wall and the wall with the window in front of you. NSL: There were some comma's needed that were not there, and some starts of sentences that were not capitals. 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